Guitar Corpse Looks good! I see youre trying to use shadows and one thing I noticed was that the outline of certain objects had that black outline around it. Try to create a piece using different shades of color to show contour as opposed to that black line.
I also think it would have been cool to see parts of the tuning stubs in the face, and have a couple of wires still attached.
Overall, its a good piece but the black outline caught my eye
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Squiel responds:
Thanks! As you can see in the video (https://youtu.be/2CoDWcGTaUw), I made the inking first because I wanted to make it in a comic style but I changed it. I should have lowered the opacity of that layer or hide it.
I made a couple of illustrations without black lines like this one https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/squielm/jester-ds2 and https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/squielm/gerat-the-wolf.
You are right, I forgot to include parts of the guitar on the head, I will take it into account in future mixes.
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